Crimson Dark

Interesting point of view, you create a world that in terms of trade is very similar to the Medieval Islamic traders. They spread technologies and plants to all parts of the Muslim realm and beyond and thus mainly traded in expensive goods that couldn't be produced in other locations. One reason why...

Is this really a pirate ship? Ships for piratical activity in the age of guns were often razed, fast low and with powerful guns. That's similar to your universe where boarding doesn't seem to be the decisive factor in space combat. But these pirate ships of the age of sail did have no small cargo ar...

The moment Kari mentioned the pandas, I expected them to be filled with crack, second thought was they could be killer-droids not yet activated, but whatever they are, I bet it will result in an unpleasant surprise.

This might be unintentional, but the wings look like a water turtle's front legs. for comparison: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... he_air.jpg
So you created a rather strange reptile.